Okay, this will be the last post. Sorry, but this is becoming more and more obviously ridiculous, sloppy, unprofessional and infuriating with every screenshot I have to take. I'd rather do it all again from scratch than keep on spamming you again and again and again (not even talking about the verbatim translations running rampant throughout the game).
"Enjoy" this last feedback, and be warned that there are probably a good hundred more blunders. The previous posts, as well as this one, should give you a fair idea of how much I'm kidding. All of those took me under two hours of testing. I'm not even sure it took more than one, truth be told. Simply put: this test driver has under 300km under his belt. See the first screenshot in this very post. How long does that take exactly?
This thing has obviously been translated by an amateur, never been checked for consistency, bugs, mistakes, typos, you name it. It's plain unforgivable and, as far as I'm concerned, is
not fit for release. Back to playing in English for good. Hastur am I glad to be bilingual.
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"Nouveaux matériels" is nonsensical. Since when are "upgrade" and "hardware" synonyms, pray tell?
"Réglages de la" is nonsensical. "Tweaks for the". That's what it says.
"Evaluation Dégâts" should be "Évaluation Dégâts" (see hereabove)
"Sauvegarder ou charger la partie" is OBVIOUSLY too long. "Sauvegarder/charger la partie" would fix it.
"Statut personnel" is nonsensical. "Statut" means STANDING, not STATUS.
"Enregistrer la partie." vs "Charger le jeu." "partie" or "jeu". Pick one and STICK TO IT. That's called consistency.
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Once again, there is a mix of imperative and infinitive. "Sélectionnez".
"En détails" is as improper as they come. "en détail".
Someone explain why there's a ":" after "Profit quotidien" and nowhere else in the table.
"Brussel" is known as "Bruxelles" to any French-speaking tourist or native. I should know, I'm Belgian. While Brussel is the correct Flemish form, over 90% of the population in town speaks French. And while on a purely territorial ground it is in Flanders, it's a region in and of itself. Thus, Bruxelles should be preferred in the French translation and Brussel in the Dutch one. Oh wait.
"Gestion chauffeur". Because obviously you'll only ever have ONE of them. "chauffeurs"
"Gestion camion". Because obviously your fleet is forever limited to ONE of them. "camions"
"Pôle Emploi" is WRONG. Not /per se/, but it's plain frenchy-french wanking. There's no Pôle Emploi in Belgium (or Switzerland, IIRC). Lucky for me I know a few French guys, so I know what it's about. Why use this when "agence de recrutement" is used while driving, by the way? Consistency?
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"Gestion garage". Because I don't see why you'd buy several, they are all over the place anyway, and others might need them. "garages".
Oh, and while you're on this screenshot, why not have a look at the ever so slightly too long to fit and/or for its own good sentence on the left that barely fits and is getting eaten alive by the arrow? (have I actually typed something longer to make my point? Lemme check... Bet I can cram a few more words in here.)
Oh, right. If you want a workaround, why don't you just delete "dans le tableau"? The arrow kinda makes it obvious.
There you go. By the way, I've translated a few games now so I can tell you all of these are accurate reports. Don't take my word for it, hit me up, I've bugged you enough on Twitter since the opening of the Linux beta, SCS. Just look at my references, mail The Hideout games, PM me, whatever. See what works for ya. But DON'T leave this as it is. Please. Localization isn't a matter to be taken so lightly.
EDIT - More blunders. Clarification.
FINAL EDIT/PS - Don't mind the harsh tone, but this is seriously tiring. Every. Single. Game. I've played that's been "translated" into French is a massacre (even more so when resorting to crowdsourcing), and this one is no exception. Crowdsourcing. Does. NOT. Work. Never. Seriously. At least not in French. Pick a *translator*, please. Someone who KNOWS the job at least a little. Someone who isn't against doing a bit of research. Someone to whom you give the means to test his work before release, too, or at LEAST someone who'll go back and check his work after release and will send you some kind of hotfix. Someone who DOES master his own language.
Peace unto you.